原文：My weekend
My weekend is very usual。 In the weekend， I don not have much free time to go to the funfair。 In fact， I never go to the funfair (游乐场) or the circus (马戏团) because I have much extra classes in the weekend。 They are Maths lesson， English lesson and Music lesson。
Maybe you think that I am a busy girl。 No， in the weekend， I can use an hour’s time to read books。 I don’t think that I’m a busy girl。 I just think that I’m a happy girl because I can learn a lot from those lessons。
I am happy enough in the weekend， especially on Sunday。
批改：My weekend
My weekend is very usual。 In the weekend， I don not have much free time to go to the funfair。 In fact， I never go to the funfair (游乐场) or the circus (马戏团) because I have much extra classes in the weekend。 They are Maths lesson， English lesson and Music lesson。
Maybe you think that I am a busy girl。 No， in the weekend， I can use an hour’s time to read books (I spend an hour reading books)。 I don’t think that I’m a busy girl。I just think that I’m a happy girl because I can learn a lot from those lessons。）
I am happy enough in the weekend， especially on Sunday。
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